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the signs of spring

the signs of spring

Photography Photography \ Figure | 06/05/06 @421 | Raelyn | Comments critiques (11) | Views views (417)


the signs of spring
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model: r.

i need a new title... suggestions?
 
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Avatar Jewel

 06/05/06 @434

The thick white border overpowers the photo kind of. ;-/

Interesting composition, nice tones.

I'll have a think about the title. :)
 
Avatar Basw

 06/05/06 @526

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This one is very original. I really really like it. I would crop the photo a little bit at the bottom, though.
The selective focus and the off-center placed girl are amazing ideas.

+10!

(the title is ok)
 
Avatar smartdesyr

 06/05/06 @559

gr8 work ...luv it ..top marks
 
Avatar Lenn0

 06/05/06 @569

great focus. very nice contrast and composition! very well done..
 
Avatar coladelight

 06/05/06 @601

I agree about cropping a bit from the bottom.
Very nice composition and the B&W works with it as well :)
Well done!
Maridol
 
Avatar RobertVovk

 06/05/06 @642

To get more springly colors or felling of the spring i would use partial desaturation, so that I would leave flowers or blooms in colors. That would give this image a boost. Nice tho.
 
Avatar Traff

 06/05/06 @675

Nice image - strong contrasty tones but good depth in the mid-tones too.

I'd be tempted to crop in a little from the right (a) to remove the twigs stiking out of the border (not being attached to the main bush they are a bit distracting) and ( b) to position the fruit on the leaves in the foreground into the corner of the pic and give them a bit more importance in the composition. Might trim a smidgin off the top too, to rebalance the proportions of the image after the first crop.

Will ponder on the title!

8) Phill
 
Avatar ARZILLIER66

 06/05/06 @693

nice composition, nice gray tones, nice contrast i like it!
(thumbup) nice work!
 
Avatar Madanapale

 06/05/06 @869

Veryn nice black and white....very interesting composition!...great mood!
Carlos
 
Avatar Gods-Mistake

 06/06/06 @471

Hm... wie wäre es mit "Blossom into beauty"?
Ich mag den ungewöhnlichen Fokus sehr und auch deine Bildaufteilung. Es sieht ja fast so aus als wenn ihr Kinn auf dem dünnen Zweig im Vordergrund liegt oder sie aus diesem heraus erwächst.
Schönes Bild. :)
 
Avatar Mihai

 06/07/06 @956

Nice black and White! Wish there was a little more focus on the model. A bigger f number maybe.
 
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   Raelyn
Full Name:
  Rae Grimm
Gender:
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Birthdate:
  11/22/1986 (21)
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  Germany
Member since:
  06/11/2003

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